A place for us to share our "what counts."
INSTRUCTIONS:
Click New Post in upper right hand corner.
Type YOUR NAME in the Post field.
Then, upload a painting (not a photograph) that reflects a theme of your writing. Include the title (italics) of the painting and the artist's name. To share the essay, go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Paste that in the large rectangle. Highlight and select "Link."
Your post seems very constructive and organized. You have very nice word usage as well; for example, the phrases "Stability brings me happiness" or the sentence where you used the word allocated in paragraph 4. Your post seems very concise and short written with deep details. I liked when you mentioned Martin Luther King. You have a very well written essay, but I think you could've used more examples using the book. You could've mentioned more examples in paragraph 3 as well. Those are the only things I would really change in your essay.
Your post seems very constructive and organized. You have very nice word usage as well; for example, the phrases "Stability brings me happiness" or the sentence where you used the word allocated in paragraph 4. Your post seems very concise and short written with deep details. I liked when you mentioned Martin Luther King. You have a very well written essay, but I think you could've used more examples using the book. You could've mentioned more examples in paragraph 3 as well. Those are the only things I would really change in your essay.
ReplyDeleteYour post is constructive and detailed. Also you have a well-organized essay. The only thing I would suggest is using more examples from the book.
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