A place for us to share our "what counts."
INSTRUCTIONS:
Click New Post in upper right hand corner.
Type YOUR NAME in the Post field.
Then, upload a painting (not a photograph) that reflects a theme of your writing. Include the title (italics) of the painting and the artist's name. To share the essay, go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Paste that in the large rectangle. Highlight and select "Link."
I am glad that the things that matter in your life are happiness, family, and faith. What situation have you been in that talking did not help and you had to put your faith in God.I think you could improve your essay by adding some more complex sentences, you have a lot of short choppy sentences.
I am glad that the things that matter in your life are happiness, family, and faith. What situation have you been in that talking did not help and you had to put your faith in God.I think you could improve your essay by adding some more complex sentences, you have a lot of short choppy sentences.
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