A place for us to share our "what counts."
INSTRUCTIONS:
Click New Post in upper right hand corner.
Type YOUR NAME in the Post field.
Then, upload a painting (not a photograph) that reflects a theme of your writing. Include the title (italics) of the painting and the artist's name. To share the essay, go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Paste that in the large rectangle. Highlight and select "Link."
Your essay was strong and very well organized. Your use of vocabulary was superb. Only thing I see to fix is your last sentence in the last paragraph. Change it to a past tense verb, "In my seven-teen years of life, I have realized what counts to me is God, family, and basketball"
Your essay was strong and very well organized. Your use of vocabulary was superb. Only thing I see to fix is your last sentence in the last paragraph. Change it to a past tense verb, "In my seven-teen years of life, I have realized what counts to me is God, family, and basketball"
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